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Scarred by ~Silver-Rage:iconSilver-Rage:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Sometimes I just want to scream
At the unfairness in this world
Become cold and heartless
So I may not feel the pain
That exist in this world

Why is it I always seem to suffer
Damn it to hell
Does everyone have scars
That never seem to heal
Scars which haunt them
And torment them unto death

I see all of this but can do nothing
For eventhough I have found the inner strength to endure
Not everyone has
And it is something they must discover on their own
I can only sit there and watch
As I see the ones I care for suffer
Sometimes my soul cries along with theirs
As I hold their hand and comfort them
That is all I can do
And it rips my soul apart but that is life
The strong endure and pray
That the weak will learn to survive
©2003-2009 ~Silver-Rage
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Author's Comments

This is not a happy poem. I was pissed when I wrote this. It's about how the strong must sometimes learn that they cannot save everyone. Sometimes people have to save themselves.

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~architectsstorm Nov 14, 2003, 3:54:42 AM
Thought it was just me...

Everyone must walk their own path and make their own destiny.

--
Death makes Angels of us all, and gives us Wings where we had shoulders smooth as Raven's claws

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~Nekrad Nov 14, 2003, 4:24:49 AM
yes i agree, everyone must make their own destiny

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liveD Once, juz to die Twice

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~Silver-Rage Nov 14, 2003, 5:26:56 AM
Hmm I think many of us feel that way we just don't talk about it.

Yup everyone must decide what they want out of life on their own. N they must discover the part of them that will allow them to do that.

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I will survive somehow I always do.
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~Silver-Rage Nov 14, 2003, 5:29:15 AM
Sometimes those who have chosen must bear the indecision of those who haven't n that hurts.

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I will survive somehow I always do.
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~Nekrad Nov 14, 2003, 5:50:11 AM
true true

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liveD Once, juz to die Twice

Member of ~Penned-From-Darkness~
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~Silver-Rage Nov 14, 2003, 6:08:58 AM
But that is life.

--
I will survive somehow I always do.
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~See-Tee-Kay Nov 14, 2003, 9:31:06 AM
wow....wow

im speechless

this is (i think) one of your best

very meaningful, love the poem

:+fav:

kudos

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~sagiel Nov 14, 2003, 9:45:07 AM
People must learn not to be selfish about their emotions. good or bad.
And they should learn to take someone's hand and know that person cares.

But I'm just rambling.

--
Come on, don't be shy! Anjiro and I are waiting for ya at Shoot to Kill
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~Silver-Rage Nov 14, 2003, 3:12:12 PM
thank u *bows profusely*. I am glad u like it so much. Honestly because it has a different atmosphere than my happy stuff I was worried what u guys would think. *phew* I am just glad u guys didn't chuck tomatoes at me. *relieved expression on face*

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I will survive somehow I always do.
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~Silver-Rage Nov 14, 2003, 3:23:36 PM
Wow thank u. That never occured to me but thank u.

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I will survive somehow I always do.
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